We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Finnias in this piece of writing you have not used the interesting adjectives you usually come up with.
You are doing well with your correct placement of capital letters and full stops. Well done.
To add more information in the middle part of your writing before you finish off.